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Why has the divorce rate increased in many countries in recent years?

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Well, I guess it's increasing because they think that they're different from what they've seen while growing up. Previous generation used to be devoted to their family because of rough time. But, current generation thinks that it affects the divorce rate because it values the individual.

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Well, I guess it's increasing because they think that they're different from what they've seen while growing up.
>>> CORRECT.

Previous generation used to be devoted to their family because of rough time.
>>> Previous generations used to be devoted to their families even on rough times.

But, current generation thinks that it affects the divorce rate because it values the individual.
>>> But the current generation thinks that it affects the divorce rate because it values the individual.

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