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I think to maintain business, it is important to address people and work that related about business.
Also, it is important to my way of thinking and the way of speaking.
The huge amount of effort that related to business is so important.
It is important that I know how much about the business and learn about it.
These are the way I maintain business.

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Good day, Min Ju! Thank you for writing your composition. I really appreciate the time and effort. It is really nice to know that business and the people are important to you. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then. Take care!~ T. Lyn
I think to maintain business, it is important to address people and work that related about business.
>>I think it is important to deal with the people and work related to the business in order to stay in business.
Also, it is important to my way of thinking and the way of speaking.
>>It also matters how I think and how I speak.
The huge amount of effort that related to business is so important.
>>The enormous effort involved in the business is just as important.
It is important that I know how much about the business and learn about it.
>>How much I know about the business and learning about it is important.
These are the way I maintain business.
>>These are the ways how I stay in business.
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