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Hi there.
As I read your sentences, I actually was so surprised that you had such a wrong thought about fine dust in Korea.
If you try to find details about fine dust, you can change your mind, I think.
I'm sure that almost 99.9 % of our fine dust comes from China.
Without the wind from China, we don't have fine dust at all.
And, this is true.
I have a good news.
Since Dr MJ agreed it, our old manager signed up for her permanent contract with me.
As you can guess, I'm so glad with that.
Since I was somewhat fatigued these days, I needed some special food for my health, so I ate an eel dish last evening.
Many Japaneses and Koreans like to eat a eel, and many of them believe that it makes us stronger and healthier.
But as you know, it's not scientific.
I'm tired as yesterday.
Regarding my homework, I cannot understand what you're asking definitely.
Lately, I saw many YouTube videos about the relationships between husband and wife.
Less expectation, more happiness.
See you tomorrow.

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Good day once again, Dr. Kim!

I hope that your fine dust level will be at a tolerable level today. According to an Internet data, fine dust is considered the most important environmental risk factor for health and is associated with three to four million deaths worldwide each year. So, this should be considered seriously by your government as well as China's.

Congratulations to your new manager! If she can withstand Dr. MJ, there is nothing she cannot do. May she contribute to the well being of your patients and serve excellently all the time.

Food allows us to inhale the scents that take us back in our minds to better times, which is an inevitable way that it can help improve our mood. Eating good food, especially with family and friends, is one of the pleasures of life. By slowing down and savoring your meal, you will get more pleasure from it. So have a stress-free lunch at work today.

Finally, preventing a divorce is always easier than getting one. I am certain that you will never experience getting one in your lifetime. Hence, always listen to your wife and always be sensitive to her needs.

You got so many correct sentences correctly here on your homework, congratulations! Your exposition was straighforward and meanigful. Keep up the high frequency of correct sentences!

See you!

-T. Donna~

Hi there.
>> Correct!

As I read your sentences, I actually was so surprised that you had such a wrong thought about fine dust in Korea.
>> Correct!

If you try to find details about fine dust, you can change your mind, I think.
>> Correct!

I'm sure that almost 99.9 % of our fine dust comes from China.
>> Correct!

Without the wind from China, we don't have fine dust at all.
>> Correct!

And, this is true.
>> Correct!

I have a good news.
>> Correct!

Since Dr MJ agreed it, our old manager signed up for her permanent contract with me.
>> Since Dr MJ agreed with it, our old manager signed up for her permanent contract with me.

As you can guess, I'm so glad with that.
>> Correct!

Since I was somewhat fatigued these days, I needed some special food for my health, so I ate an eel dish last evening.
>> Correct!

Many Japaneses and Koreans like to eat a eel, and many of them believe that it makes us stronger and healthier.
>> Many Japaneses and Koreans like to eat eel, and many of them believe that it makes them stronger and healthier.

But as you know, it's not scientific.
>> Correct!

I'm tired as yesterday.
>> Correct!

Regarding my homework, I cannot understand what you're asking definitely.
>> Correct!

Lately, I saw many YouTube videos about the relationships between husband and wife.
>> Lately, I saw many YouTube videos about relationships between husband and wife.

Less expectation, more happiness.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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