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My favorite food is pasta.

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My favorite food is Italian pasta. I can eat it everyday. There are several reasons why I love pasta.
First of all, it is healthy food. The basic ingredients of past are Fresh olive oil, tomato, garlic, basil, onion and various kind of pasta noodles. There are no unhealthy ingredients. Additional we can put some seasonal things in pasta. For example, recently I cooked pasta with spring dale. Dale is seasoned vegetable.

Also, pasta is very delicious. Fresh sweet tomato with savory noodles, pungent olive scent, rich taste of salt and collaboration of them are amazing! I cannot imagine life with out pasta.

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You just made me hungry, Hae In! My appetite has increased while reading the details of your favorite pasta. I hope you can have one later. See you!-Faith-
My favorite food is Italian pasta. 
>> CORRECT
I can eat it everyday. 
>> I can eat it every day. 
There are several reasons why I love pasta.
>> CORRECT
First of all, it is healthy food. 
>> First of all, it is a healthy food. 
The basic ingredients of past are Fresh olive oil, tomato, garlic, basil, onion and various kind of pasta noodles. 
>> The basic ingredients of pasta are fresh olive oil, tomato, garlic, basil, onion and various kind of pasta noodles. 
There are no unhealthy ingredients. 
>> CORRECT
OR All ingredients are healthy.
Additional we can put some seasonal things in pasta. 
>> Additionally, we can put some seasonings in pasta. 
For example, recently I cooked pasta with spring dale. 
>> CORRECT
Dale is seasoned vegetable.
>> Dale is a seasonal vegetable.
Also, pasta is very delicious. 
>> CORRECT
Fresh sweet tomato with savory noodles, pungent olive scent, rich taste of salt and collaboration of them are amazing!
>> The collaboration of fresh sweet tomato with savory noodles, pungent olive scent, and rich taste of salt are amazing. 
I cannot imagine life with out pasta.
>> I cannot imagine life without pasta.
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