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Essay homework (04/17)

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Hello, Cathy :)

I have to say something to you.

Actually, the last essay time I miss unterstood the homework.

I undersood that the homework said that what are 3 words "that I can describe best" not "me"

So, I wrote like that... Therefore, I'm not 1% man :( I'm sorry..

I hope the day when I can understand your questions or sayings perfectlly.

Then, now is the today's homework.

I ususally work for all days. Specifically, I heard the content of inventions from inventors and make it to specification and claims.

Also, I consult with some ceo of small entity about strategy of patent.

This is my how to spend time in the weeday.

When weekends, I sleep allday on one day and I meet my friends from morning to evening on the other day.

This is it.

Thank you. Cathy.

From Mike

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Hi Mike,

 

Thank you for being honest. I appreciate that. I know speaking honestly can be uncomfortable or difficult, but engaging in open and honest conversations is more rewarding and socially fulfilling than one might think. And it's never a big deal if you commit mistakes or misunderstood something. Of course, letting me know is really important so we could correct whatever things that need to be corrected. Please remember that all opinions are heard and respected here in our class. Miscommunication is inevitable, even in the local language. How much more if we are speaking in a foreign language? Learning a foreign language is one of the hardest things a brain can do. What makes a foreign language so difficult is the effort we have to make to transfer between linguistically complex structures. It's also challenging to learn how to think in another language. Above all, it takes time, hard work, and dedication.

~Teacher Cathy


Hello, Cathy :)
>>CORRECT
I have to say something to you.
>>CORRECT
Actually, the last essay time I miss unterstood the homework.
>>Actually, in the last essay, I miss understood the homework.
I undersood that the homework said that what are 3 words "that I can describe best" not "me"
>>I thought that the homework question is What are 3 words "that I can describe best" not "me".
So, I wrote like that... Therefore, I'm not 1% man :( I'm sorry..
>>So, I wrote like that... Therefore, I'm not 1% of a man :( I'm sorry.
I hope the day when I can understand your questions or sayings perfectlly.
>>I hope for the day when I can understand your questions or sayings perfectly.
Then, now is the today's homework.
>>And for today's homework.
I ususally work for all days.

>>I usually work for the whole day.

Specifically, I heard the content of inventions from inventors and make it to specification and claims.
>>Specifically, I heard the content of inventions from inventors and make it to specifications and claims.
Also, I consult with some ceo of small entity about strategy of patent.
>>Also, I consult with some CEO of small entities about the strategy of patents.

This is my how to spend time in the weeday.
>>This is my how to spend time on the weekday.
When weekends, I sleep allday on one day and I meet my friends from morning to evening on the other day.
>>When weekends, I sleep all day on one day and I meet my friends from morning to evening on the other day.
This is it.
>>CORRECT
Thank you. Cathy.
>>CORRECT
From Mike

>>CORRECT

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