¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*È­
2023-04-14 174

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

That's interesting!
I will buy a small country house and a camper.
And I will open a new Zumba Center.
If I have any money left over, I'll save it.
I'm happy even imagining

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good morning, Eliana!
Imagining that someone gave you one million dollars makes you really happy. But what if it's was not given and you really work hard for it? Would you do the same thing? 
Have a great day :)
Aki~

That's interesting!
>>> CORRECT!

I will buy a small country house and a camper.
>>> CORRECT!

And I will open a new Zumba Center.
>>> CORRECT!

If I have any money left over, I'll save it.
>>> If I have any money left, I'll save it.

I'm happy even imagining
>>> I'm already happy just imagining.
>>> I'm already happy even if it's just an imagination.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
127385 What are the mistakes that you keep committing? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 277
127384 Sweets are the biggest problem in my life ¹é*¾ð ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 2
127383 What was the most beautiful dream you ever had? ·ù*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 1
127382 How can you encourage more members to join your activities? ·ù*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 1
127381 today\'s homework Ãß*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 2
127380 What did you reflect on Easter? ·ù*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 1
127379 4.12 homework ±Ç*¸² ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 121
127378 ny today plan ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 169
127377 Do you have a five year plan for your life? Àå*Àº ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 162
127376 4/12 homework. ÃÖ*º½ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 108
127375 4/10 homework °­*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 2
127374 Homework ¹è*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 176
127373 My color ±Ç*ÀÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 1
127372 Tell me! ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 146
127371 How do you celebrate Christmas? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 0
127370 What makes restaurant be great ¼º*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 1
127369 Write an essay about your favorite travel destination. ¹Ú*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 5
127368 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-12 1
127367 To be healthy ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-11 191
127366 definition of \'hard work\' is depend on interest of work. ÀÌ*¿õ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-11 3

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04