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State a situation where a "family life" affects relations with others.
>>> If one of my family members has a hard time, I spend my time for my family. For this case, I restrict my time for my friends or other people.

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Hi Steve!
Exactly! We have different situations that may our relationship with other people and it takes courage and wisdom how to handle them. As you stated, if you restrict your time for your friends and other people, eventually you will lose them. understanding is the key this time.
Have a great weekend!
T. Aki~

If one of my family members has a hard time, I spend my time for my family. 
>>>  If one of my family members has a hard time, I spend my time with my family. 

For this case, I restrict my time for my friends or other people.
>>> For this case, I restrict my time to my friends or other people.
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