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What are the most annoying bad driving habits of other drivers in your country
>>> I think the drivers who speed unnecessarily. It is dangerous to other drivers and pedestrians. Furthermore, they make some big noise.

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Good morning, Steve!
One of the causes of road accidents is that some people do not know about defensive driving (describes the practice of drivers who consciously reduce the dangers associated with driving. Defensive driving techniques reduce the likelihood of a collision or incident and can even save costs related to vehicle maintenance and fuel consumption, by driving smoothly and steadily).
I hope that everyone will have this kind of mindset.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~


I think the drivers who speed unnecessarily. 
>>> I think drivers who are over speeding.

It is dangerous to other drivers and pedestrians. 
>>> CORRECT!

Furthermore, they make some big noise.
>>> CORRECT! 
OR >>> Furthermore, they create loud noises.
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