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my favorite move is Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them

작성자: 윤*혜
2023-04-12 1293

회원님의 영작문

"Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" is the movies that a fantasy world based on the novel.
this book's writer is JK Rowling!
She is writed "Harry Potter" too
and she also participated in the screenplay whit this movie.

This movie is show the fantasy animals, lovely actors, and kind main characters.
and they show me the warm and funny stories like fantasy animals, family story, love story
Before I watched this movie, I liked other movie, but I saw this movie, I fell in love with it!
now it is my favorite movie :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Da Hye,

Thank you for answering your homework. Like you, I also love to watch movies and I also like Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. I would like to use magic as a metaphor for our inherent abilities, which I believe we should cultivate and perfect. Through the Fantastic Beasts movie, Rowling created a beautiful story about magical children who denied and suppressed their own magical abilities. Some children who possessed magical abilities made the decision to conceal their abilities in the past due to the persecution of witches and wizards. Credence Barebone, a young man, portrayed this character. Additionally, we are aware of Credence's fate. Because he suppressed his magical abilities, he became obscure. I accept that this isn't excessively disparate, in actuality. Denying oneself the opportunity to develop and enjoy one's talents and abilities in order to avoid persecution is one of life's most tragic outcomes. By depicting a perfect (and terrifying) image of what could happen to us if we didn't discover and develop our talents and skills, J.K. Rowling made a persuasive case for us to do so.

~Teacher Cathy

 

"Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" is the movies that a fantasy world based on the novel.

>> "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" is a fantasy movie that is based on the novel.

This book's writer is JK Rowling!

>> The writer of this book is JK Rowling.

She is writed "Harry Potter" too

>> She wrote "Harry Potter" too.

And she also participated in the screenplay with this movie.

>> She also participated in the screenplay of this movie.

This movie is show the fantasy animals, lovely actors, and kind main characters.

>> This movie shows fantasy creatures, lovely actors, and kind main characters.

And they show me the warm and funny stories like fantasy animals, family story, love story.

>> And they show me warm and funny stories like fantasy creatures, family stories, and love stories.

Before I watched this movie, I liked other movie, but I saw this movie, I fell in love with it!

>> I liked another movie before seeing this one, but when I saw it, I fell in love with it!

now it is my favorite movie :)

>>Now it is my favorite movie :)

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