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The bucket list

작성자: 김*영
2023-04-10 552

회원님의 영작문

There are a lot of things that i want to do. Whatever I do something, I would get one thing that i want to do. For example, when I read a book or watch You-tube, Netflix, I find one of my bucket lists. Recently, Because the covid-19 was almost done, many people go to travel and they post their trip on their social media. I also really love to travel so when i see the posting related to the travel, I remember that spot or write down that countries on my bucket list.
Most of my bucket lists are related to the travel. I think the travel is the most valuable action during our life. Since our life is very limited and unexpected, we should experience other countries as much as we can. Except the countries where known as the unsafe, I want to travel all around the world especially the Europe. I think the Europe has own their atmosphere which is really noble and sophisticated. After I retire, I hope that i’ll be achieving my bucket list.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Ellen, 
The focus of a bucket list is to live a life with hopes and aspirations. Making a bucket list allows us to reflect on our values and goals, and identify important milestones and experiences that we want to have in our lifetime. And a bucket list forces you to look at the life you are living and the life you would like to say you've had. If these two lifestyles are nothing like each other, this can provide motivation and inspiration to begin living the life you desire. ~ Teacher QUENNY

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There are a lot of things that i want to do. Whatever I do something, I would get one thing that i want to do. For example, when I read a book or watch You-tube, Netflix, I find one of my bucket lists. Recently, Because the covid-19 was almost done, many people go to travel and they post their trip on their social media. I also really love to travel so when i see the posting related to the travel, I remember that spot or write down that countries on my bucket list.
>>  There are a lot of things that I want to do. Whenever I do something, I would get one thing that I want to do. For example, when I read a book or watch YouTube or Netflix, I find one of my bucket lists. Recently, because the covid-19 was almost done, many people go to travel and post their trips on their social media. I also really love to travel so when I see a posting related to travel, I remember that spot or write down that country on my bucket list.

Most of my bucket lists are related to the travel. I think the travel is the most valuable action during our life. Since our life is very limited and unexpected, we should experience other countries as much as we can. Except the countries where known as the unsafe, I want to travel all around the world especially the Europe. I think the Europe has own their atmosphere which is really noble and sophisticated. After I retire, I hope that i’ll be achieving my bucket list
>> Most of my bucket lists are related to travel. I think travel is the most valuable action in our life. Since our life is very limited and unexpected, we should experience other countries as much as we can. Except for the countries that were known as unsafe. I want to travel all around the world, especially Europe. I think Europe has its own atmosphere which is really noble and sophisticated. After I retire, I hope that I’ll be achieving my bucket list. 

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There are a lot of things that i want to do. Whatever I do something, I would get one thing that i want to do. For example, when I read a book or watch You-tube, Netflix, I find one of my bucket lists. Recently, Because the covid-19 was almost done, many people go to travel and they post their trip on their social media. I also really love to travel so when i see the posting related to the travel, I remember that spot or write down that countries on my bucket list.
Most of my bucket lists are related to the travel. I think the travel is the most valuable action during our life. Since our life is very limited and unexpected, we should experience other countries as much as we can. Except the countries where known as the unsafe, I want to travel all around the world especially the Europe. I think the Europe has own their atmosphere which is really noble and sophisticated. After I retire, I hope that i’ll be achieving my bucket list
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