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It's sunrise that I think the most beautiful in nature.
Because when I look at the sunrise, I feel nature's wonder.
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Thanks, Sae Bom! 

Nature is made of everything we see around us – trees, flowers, plants, animals, sky, mountains, forests and more. Human beings depend on nature to stay alive. Nature helps us breathe, gives us food, water, shelter, medicines, and clothes. We find many colors in nature which make the Earth beautiful.

- Kristine ^^ 

It's sunrise that I think the most beautiful in nature.
>> In my opinion, the most beautiful thing in nature is the sunrise.
Because when I look at the sunrise, I feel nature's wonder.
>> Because I feel the wonder of nature when I see a sunrise.
Furthermore when I look at this, I forget worried about something.
>> Furthermore, whenever I see the sunrise, I stop worrying about anything.
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