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how important is good greeting in korea?

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I think good greeting is quite important. Greeting in polite way or rude way affect the first impression of the person who greets. and First impression sometimes lasts long. Polite and bright greeting also can make the person who receives a greeting happy.

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Hello, Oscar!

Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it¡¯s done! So have faith you¡¯ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!

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I think good greeting is quite important.
>> I think a good greeting is quite important.

Greeting in polite way or rude way affect the first impression of the person who greets.
>> Greeting in a polite way or a rude way affects the first impression of the person who you greet.

and First impression sometimes lasts long.
>> And a first impression lasts long.

Polite and bright greeting also can make the person who receives a greeting happy.
>> Polite and bright greeting can also make the person who receives it happy.

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