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Should students stop wearing school uniforms? Why or why not?

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2023-04-09 791

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I don't think so. It's because I don't want to wear my few clothes. I don't have a various kind of clothes and I have to think what I wear. But if we wear school uniform, I don't have to think what I wear today. I think wearing school uniform is not bad it's because I don't have to see some students who wear stand out clothes from others. Actually, my school's students are want to get many attention but I don't like to watch it.

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Good evening Daisy. 
Thank you for beautifully answering this question. ^^
I agree that students should wear a school uniform because this avoids discrimination when it comes to social status. 
Some students are rich and some are poor. If students stop wearing uniforms, the social status of the students will be very distinct. 
Anyhow, I hope you're having a lovely evening. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry 

I don't think so. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because I don't want to wear my few clothes. 
>> CORRECT!
I don't have a various kind of clothes and I have to think what I wear. 
>> I don't have various kinds of clothes and I have to think of what to wear.
But if we wear school uniform, I don't have to think what I wear today. 
>> But if we wear a school uniform, I don't have to think what to wear on that day. 
I think wearing school uniform is not bad it's because I don't have to see some students who wear stand out clothes from others. 
>> I think wearing a school uniform is not bad. It's because I don't have to see some students wearing more expensive clothes that the others.
Actually, my school's students are want to get many attention but I don't like to watch it.
>> Actually, many of the students in my school want to get a lot of attention but I don't like seeing it.
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