¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Should students stop wearing school uniforms? Why or why not?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±¸*¿ì
2023-04-09 214

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I don't think so. It's because I don't want to wear my few clothes. I don't have a various kind of clothes and I have to think what I wear. But if we wear school uniform, I don't have to think what I wear today. I think wearing school uniform is not bad it's because I don't have to see some students who wear stand out clothes from others. Actually, my school's students are want to get many attention but I don't like to watch it.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good evening Daisy. 
Thank you for beautifully answering this question. ^^
I agree that students should wear a school uniform because this avoids discrimination when it comes to social status. 
Some students are rich and some are poor. If students stop wearing uniforms, the social status of the students will be very distinct. 
Anyhow, I hope you're having a lovely evening. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry 

I don't think so. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because I don't want to wear my few clothes. 
>> CORRECT!
I don't have a various kind of clothes and I have to think what I wear. 
>> I don't have various kinds of clothes and I have to think of what to wear.
But if we wear school uniform, I don't have to think what I wear today. 
>> But if we wear a school uniform, I don't have to think what to wear on that day. 
I think wearing school uniform is not bad it's because I don't have to see some students who wear stand out clothes from others. 
>> I think wearing a school uniform is not bad. It's because I don't have to see some students wearing more expensive clothes that the others.
Actually, my school's students are want to get many attention but I don't like to watch it.
>> Actually, many of the students in my school want to get a lot of attention but I don't like seeing it.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126810 homework ½Å*ÈÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-23 138
126809 3/22nd homework. ¼®*°á ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 3
126808 i know for sure what to fix now À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 245
126807 Homework ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 106
126806 homework 03.22 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 97
126805 English lesson À±*¼º ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 100
126804 unit 13. homework °ø*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 71
126803 What kind of unique diet have you heard of? (ex: Seafood diet,... õ*¶õ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126802 Homework ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 129
126801 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 220
126800 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 239
126799 homework ½Å*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 0
126798 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 83
126797 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126796 What are the common reasons that you fail to include some... ±¸*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126795 i\'m gone to the Restaurant À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 96
126794 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 108
126793 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126792 Would you trust a counselor with your secret, especially about... ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126791 homework ¼Õ*±Ù ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 228

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04