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Korean traditional Thanksgiving

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Our Thanksgiving, called Chuseok, falls on the 15th of August by the lunar calendar. On the holiday, my family, our siblings and their children gather together. We enjoy special food which we make on the previous day and we go to our father's tomb. We also visit a nursing home to see our mother. At night we enjoy the full moon. The moon on Chuseok is the biggest and brightest. Sometimes we travel abroad instead of family gathering.

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Good morning, Gi Yean!
Thank you for completing your homework.  ^^
See you tomorrow~ 
-T.Jhozel 
Our Thanksgiving, called Chuseok, falls on the 15th of August by the lunar calendar.
>> According to the lunar calendar, our Thanksgiving, known as Chuseok, falls on August 15th.
On the holiday, my family, our siblings and their children gather together.
>> Correct
OR: My family, our siblings, and their children all gather for the holiday.
We enjoy special food which we make on the previous day and we go to our father's tomb.
>> Correct!
>> 
We eat special food that we prepare the day before and visit our father's grave.
We also visit a nursing home to see our mother.
>> Correct!
At night we enjoy the full moon.
>> Correct
The moon on Chuseok is the biggest and brightest.
>> Correct!
Sometimes we travel abroad instead of family gathering.
>> Correct!
OR: 
We sometimes travel abroad instead of attending family gatherings.
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