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1. What are the important experiences? you've been through.
2. Are you someone who values the process or the outcome?
3. When I had a group meeting, it was pretty boring.
4. You used to say "I like a person who is a responsible of type."
5. What do you say? my attitude during a class.

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Fantastic Tuesday, Elic! Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Have faith in yourself because I have faith in you. Good luck to you. Everything seems impossible until it is done. You did great today, keep doing your best.

What are the important experiences? you've been through.
>>> What are the important experiences you've been through?

Are you someone who values the process or the outcome?
>>> CORRECT.

When I had a group meeting, it was pretty boring.
>>> The group meeting was pretty boring.

 You used to say "I like a person who is a responsible of type."
>>> You used to say "I like a responsible man".


What do you say? my attitude during a class.
>>> What can you say about my attitude in class?
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