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The social activity

작성자: 김*영
2023-04-03 760

회원님의 영작문

As we know, humans are social animals. It means people can’t live without people. People have to interact with others. It’s not going to be special. In the coffee shop, asking the menu to the customer and when we take a taxi, we would have a small talk with the taxi driver even though they meet for the first time. These can be also the social activities so people need to interact with someone consistently.
I’m a Christian so i have been very memorable social activity. I did missionary work with my church members. We’ve never known each other before. We met for the first time to do missionary work. It was a little bit awkward. We’ve been China for a week. We prayed, ate and slept together also we shared our feeling and thoughts so when the missionary work ended, we were really close.
Improving social skills needs practice. How to communicate with others well. The more we spend time with others the more it could be easy to improve our social skills.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Ellen,  
Social skills are vital in enabling an individual to have and maintain positive interactions with others. An social skills are important because they can help you communicate more effectively and efficiently and, as a result, help you build, maintain and grow relationships with colleagues, clients, and new contacts. These skills are important to maintain and improve no matter your position, industry, or experience level. ~ Teacher QUENNY


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As we know, humans are social animals. It means people can’t live without people. People have to interact with others. It’s not going to be special. In the coffee shop, asking the menu to the customer and when we take a taxi, we would have a small talk with the taxi driver even though they meet for the first time. These can be also the social activities so people need to interact with someone consistently.
I’m a Christian so i have been very memorable social activity. I did missionary work with my church members. We’ve never known each other before. We met for the first time to do missionary work. It was a little bit awkward. We’ve been China for a week. We prayed, ate and slept together also we shared our feeling and thoughts so when the missionary work ended, we were really close.
Improving social skills needs practice. How to communicate with others well. The more we spend time with others the more it could be easy to improve our social skills.
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 As we know, humans are social animals. It means people can’t live without people. People have to interact with others. It’s not going to be easy or special. For example, in the coffee shop, you will ask what are the orders of your customers and when we take a taxi, we would have small talk with the taxi driver even though we just meet for the first time. These can be also an example of social activities. So people need to interact with someone consistently.
I’m a Christian so I have lots of very memorable social activities. I did missionary work with my church members and we’ve never known each other before. We met for the first time to do missionary work. It was a little bit awkward at first. We’ve been in China for a week. We prayed, ate, and slept together also we shared our feelings and thoughts so when the missionary work ended, we were really close.
Improving social skills needs practice and how to communicate with others well. The more we spend time with others the more it could be easy to improve our social skills.


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As we know, humans are social animals. It means people can’t live without people. People have to interact with others. It’s not going to be special. In the coffee shop, asking the menu to the customer and when we take a taxi, we would have a small talk with the taxi driver even though they meet for the first time. These can be also the social activities so people need to interact with someone consistently.
I’m a Christian so i have been very memorable social activity. I did missionary work with my church members. We’ve never known each other before. We met for the first time to do missionary work. It was a little bit awkward. We’ve been China for a week. We prayed, ate and slept together also we shared our feeling and thoughts so when the missionary work ended, we were really close.
Improving social skills needs practice. How to communicate with others well. The more we spend time with others the more it could be easy to improve our social skills.
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