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Do you think poisonous plants like the one in the article should be removed to keep humans safe? If

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I think poisonous plants like the one in the article should be removed to keep humans safe. As claimed by Eat The Earth, "there are somewhere between 10 and 60 total fatalities due to plant and mushroom poisoning annually in the United States." This shows people died because of poisonous plants, even though it's not a huge number of fatalities. I believe if there are at least 10 people who die because of plants, the government or some people should respond to remove those plants. In addition, The removal of these plants helps protect the environment since many poisonous plants can spread quickly and overtake other plants. To consider those risks, poisonous plants must be removed for everyone's safety, a better environment, etc.

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I completely agree with you, Su A.  Regardless of the small number of fatalities, we should be considerate of every life on Earth. I also appreciate you adding another reliable source of information and citing it well.  Concise and greatly written. Well done! 
~T.Harmony <3

I think poisonous plants like the one in the article should be removed to keep humans safe. 
>> CORRECT!
As claimed by Eat The Earth, "there are somewhere between 10 and 60 total fatalities due to plant and mushroom poisoning annually in the United States." 
>> CORRECT!
This shows people died because of poisonous plants, even though it's not a huge number of fatalities. 
>> This shows that people have died because of...
I believe if there are at least 10 people who die because of plants, the government or some people should respond to remove those plants. 
>> ...at least 10 people who have died because of plants,...
In addition, The removal of these plants helps protect the environment since many poisonous plants can spread quickly and overtake other plants. 
>> CORRECT!
To consider those risks, poisonous plants must be removed for everyone's safety, a better environment, etc.
>> CORRECT!
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