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The complaints

작성자: 김*영
2023-03-29 642

회원님의 영작문

People usually think that Complaints are bad and rude actions but I don't think so.
We pay a cost for something or service so If we couldn't enjoy a right or If it invades your right, you need to complain someone or company.
For example, at the restaurant, when you are eating pizza and you find someone's hair inside the pizza not yours. You need to call the manager and tell her about the situation. You don't need to be rude or angry even if you're really upset. You just need to explain what happen and how you are feeling calmly. Therefore, they will be really careful when they cook and manage something in a sanitary so they are not going to make a mistake again. It is really good for both of them, the restaurant and customer.
If you complain some problems in a good way, It can be helpful.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Ellen, 
Complaining is a natural part of human communication. It is often a response to problems or a way to communicate dissatisfaction. Sometimes, however, people might find themselves wondering if they complain too much. It's probably not realistic to decide to never complain again, but setting limits can be beneficial. ~ Techer QUENNY

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People usually think that Complaints are bad and rude actions but I don't think so.
We pay a cost for something or service so If we couldn't enjoy a right or If it invades your right, you need to complain someone or company.
For example, at the restaurant, when you are eating pizza and you find someone's hair inside the pizza not yours. You need to call the manager and tell her about the situation. You don't need to be rude or angry even if you're really upset. You just need to explain what happen and how you are feeling calmly. Therefore, they will be really careful when they cook and manage something in a sanitary so they are not going to make a mistake again. It is really good for both of them, the restaurant and customer.
If you complain some problems in a good way, It can be helpful.
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People usually think that Complaints are bad and rude actions but I don't think so.
We pay a cost for something or for a service so if we couldn't enjoy a right or if it invades our right then we need to complain to someone or to a company.
For example, at a restaurant, when you are eating pizza and you find someone's hair inside the pizza that's not yours. You need to call the manager and tell her about the situation. You don't need to be rude or angry even if you're really upset. You just need to explain what happens and how you are feeling calmly. Therefore, they will be really careful when they cook and manage something  in a sanitary so they are not going to make a mistake again. It is really good for both of them, the restaurant and the customer.
If you complain about some problems in a good way, it can be helpful and easy to solve.

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People usually think that Complaints are bad and rude actions but I don't think so.
We pay a cost for something or service so If we couldn't enjoy a right or If it invades your right, you need to complain someone or company.
For example, at the restaurant, when you are eating pizza and you find someone's hair inside the pizza not yours. You need to call the manager and tell her about the situation. You don't need to be rude or angry even if you're really upset. You just need to explain what happen and how you are feeling calmly. Therefore, they will be really careful when they cook and manage something in a sanitary so they are not going to make a mistake again. It is really good for both of them, the restaurant and customer.
If you complain some problems in a good way, It can be helpful.
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