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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is your favorite subject at school?



My favorite subject when I was student is physical(sports) education.
Because it is free activities possible at school for the time of physical education.
I always waited for this subject time.
I usually spend time playing soccer or basketball with my friends.
But, this subjects is not have exams, so it's not helpful for university entrance.
But it was my favorite subject.

And, Anyway, I grew confidence in English thanks to Camille teacher for a short time.
Thank You. I'll be back soon.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is your favorite subject at school?




My favorite subject when I was student is physical(sports) education.
>> My favorite subject when I was a student is physical(sports) education.
Because it is free activities possible at school for the time of physical education.
>> That's because there are free activities possible at school for the time of physical education.
I always waited for this subject time.
>> CORRECT!
I usually spend time playing soccer or basketball with my friends.
>> CORRECT!
But, this subjects is not have exams, so it's not helpful for university entrance.
>> But, this subject does not have exams, so it's not helpful for entering the university.
But it was my favorite subject.
>> CORRECT!

And, Anyway, I grew confidence in English thanks to Camille teacher for a short time.
Thank You. I'll be back soon.  
[ No worries ~ I am glad that I have helped you. Always do your best!    ~ T. Camille ]
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