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Which animal makes the best pet? Why?

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I think a cat makes the best pet. It's because I like the cat. The cat makes me happy and it is very cute. Actually, a dog also makes the best pet because growing a dog and a cat is common. But I like a cat more so If we grow up to adult, I want to grow my own cat.

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Good afternoon Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for sharing about your favorite kind of pet. I agree that cats and dogs make the best pets. 
But do you know that cats are spirit animals too? In addition, some stories say that they drive away evil spirits and have the ability to absorb your stress and negative energy.
I think pets in general are stress relievers. 
I hope you're having an awesome day. 
See you in class later. ^^
~T. Charry


I think a cat makes the best pet. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because I like the cat. 
>> It's because I like cats. 
The cat makes me happy and it is very cute. 
>> CORRECT!
Actually, a dog also makes the best pet because growing a dog and a cat is common. 
>> Actually, a dog also makes the best pet because raising a dog and a cat is common. 
But I like a cat more so If we grow up to adult, I want to grow my own cat.
>> But I like a cat more so when I grow up and become an adult, I want to raise my own cat.
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