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회원님의 영작문

1. His assessment of the situation is (on the money), ( = completely correct) as always.
2. Stop asking your parents to help you out financially. They're not (money talks) !
3. When you tell someone ("time is money"), you're basically telling that person that your time is valuable, and that he or she should not waste it.
4. They (came into money) when their grandparents died.
5. The expression (not made of money) refers to the idea that money gives one power and/or influence.
6. Buy whatever bicycle you want. (Money is no object). ( = it doesn't matter how much it costs)
7. The entry fee to the amusement park is quite high, but you really (put your money where your mouth is). It's worth it!
8. You talk a lot about how much you love animals. Well, it's time to (get your money's worth). Either donate to a local charity, or become a volunteer there.
9. To impress his girlfriend, Jim acts like he has (money to burn), buying her expensive presents, taking her out to dinner every night, etc.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello May,

Having the courage to push yourself in learning idioms can be a big step for you to improve your skills, even if the topics could be sometimes difficult. The most important thing to do is to create a plan and follow that plan. Start with your English learning goals, and then make a specific plan to succeed.

T. Jeny


1. His assessment of the situation is (on the money), ( = completely correct) as always.
>>correct
2. Stop asking your parents to help you out financially. They're not (money talks) !
>>a - not made of money
3. When you tell someone ("time is money"), you're basically telling that person that your time is valuable, and that he or she should not waste it.
>>correct
4. They (came into money) when their grandparents died.
>>correct
5. The expression (not made of money) refers to the idea that money gives one power and/or influence.
>>c - money talks
6. Buy whatever bicycle you want. (Money is no object). ( = it doesn't matter how much it costs)
>>correct
7. The entry fee to the amusement park is quite high, but you really (put your money where your mouth is). It's worth it!
>>f - get your money's worth
8. You talk a lot about how much you love animals. Well, it's time to (get your money's worth). Either donate to a local charity, or become a volunteer there.
>>e - put your money where your mouth is
9. To impress his girlfriend, Jim acts like he has (money to burn), buying her expensive presents, taking her out to dinner every night, etc.
>>correct
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