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People who live are boring concern in the abnormal and preference trend.

They tend to persue only personal happiness and enjoyment in their life.

They don't feel a sense of accomplishment in their jib and work(studying).

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Good morning, Ms. Lily!
The human mind is unlimited. We tend to create new and innovative ways to attract the attention of many people. And just like cafes in Korea, they make changes from traditional to themed cafes to earn for a living, express their imagination and be trendy.
See you later.
Aki~

People who live are boring concern in the abnormal and preference trend.
>> People who live are bored and concerned about the abnormal and preference trend.

They tend to persue only personal happiness and enjoyment in their life.
>> They tend to pursue only personal happiness and enjoyment in their life.

They don't feel a sense of accomplishment in their job and work(studying).
>> CORRECT!
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