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Hi Henry, 
A safe and supportive school culture should reflect shared values and take into account the communities and cultures students bring with them to school. And the importance of comfort for student success is clear as schools create spaces where students want to learn rather than spaces where they're forced to learn. With a more comfortable environment, students have the opportunity to grow and learn without the challenges of an uncomfortable environment. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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