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How would you like to carry out the ministry God wanted you to manage?

작성자: 류*선
2023-03-23 1059

회원님의 영작문

I don't know well what God wants me to manage about kind of ministry. I just do the best in my life that God shows me. I don't care about any position that I have in this church. I just enjoy my work even if people don't know my effort and dedication to the church. Because God already knows my situation. I believe that God will give me a good time to reveal myself in front of people. Its time will be perfect for everybody. God gave me his wisdom when I serve the church. I always pray what I need his wisdom and grace in ministry. Especially since it's not easy to ministry in the USA. I felt like I couldn't do anything and the church didn't need me. I couldn't discover my vision and my value of ministry in the USA because of the obstacle of language. I had a hard time in this church. I was very lonely. God knew my situation and the details of my emotions during a hard time. Even though sometimes I'm tired of church work, I'm really happy to serve church now. Thank you, Faith! :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

God is the happiest while seeing you serving Him unconditionally, Jane. I also look up to you because of your humble involvement in different church services. God bless your whole family!-Faith-
I don't know well what God wants me to manage about kind of ministry. 
>> I do not know well which kind of ministry God wants me to manage. 
I just do the best in my life that God shows me. 
>> I just do my best in life that God shows me. 
I don't care about any position that I have in this church. 
>> I do not care about any position that I can have in this church. 
I just enjoy my work even if people don't know my effort and dedication to the church. Because God already knows my situation. 
>> I just enjoy my work even if people do not know my effort and dedication to the church because God already knows my situation. 
I believe that God will give me a good time to reveal myself in front of people. 
>> CORRECT
OR I have faith in God that everything will be unfolded in His perfect time.
Its time will be perfect for everybody. 
>> His time will be perfect for everybody. 
God gave me his wisdom when I serve the church. 
>> God gave me His wisdom when I serve the church. 
I always pray what I need his wisdom and grace in ministry. Especially since it's not easy to ministry in the USA. 
>> I always pray what I need His wisdom and grace in ministry, especially since it is not easy to do ministry in the USA. 
I felt like I couldn't do anything and the church didn't need me. 
>> I felt like I could not do anything and the church did not need me. 
I couldn't discover my vision and my value of ministry in the USA because of the obstacle of language. 
>> I could not discover my vision and my value in a ministry in the USA because of the language barriers. 
I had a hard time in this church. I was very lonely. 
>> I had a hard time in this church and I was very lonely. 
God knew my situation and the details of my emotions during a hard time. 
>> CORRECT 
Even though sometimes I'm tired of church work, I'm really happy to serve church now. 
>> Even though sometimes I am tired of church work, I am really happy to serve the church now. 
Thank you, Faith! :)
>> CORRECT 
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