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 What do you do if you went to work and most of your colleagues, including your boss, had long faces? How do you deal with it?


In that situation, there might be serious reason connecting with comapany or some colleague. 
>>  In this case, I'd assume that there's an issue involving the company or some employee. 

So first I would ask one colleague about what happen. And then I would do something for better mood or for solution.
>> Hence, I'd first ask one colleague about what happened and then do something to improve the mood of everyone or find a solution to the problem.

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