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The electricity spring to my mind when I think of my mother's image
it is because when they are in the normal life we feel like part of everyday life but If there isn't we know how it is important and how we need.
In one word my mother is shield because they protect and always trust us and really helpful to me

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Hello, Jay! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The electricity spring to my mind when I think of my mother's image
it is because when they are in the normal life we feel like part of everyday life but If there isn't we know how it is important and how we need.
>>> Electricity springs to my mind when I think of my mother's image it is because in ordinary life they are part of our everyday life but if there is no electricity we realize how essential it is and how we need it.

In one word my mother is shield because they protect and always trust us and really helpful to me
>>> In one word my mother is a shield because she protects and always trusts us, and she is really helpful to me.
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