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My favorite amusement park ride is roller coaster and Atlantic express. Because I like thrilling, and adventure.

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Hello, Liu!

Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!

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