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i\'m gone to the Restaurant

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the last place when I visited a restaurant
because when I went to a restaurant before I got covid-19.
and I don't go anywhere because I got covid-19
and when I recovered from covid-19, the health center talk me "you can wear the mask for 3 days."
so I was outside in my job is my only place when I recovered.

so I think my last place is a restaurant.

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Hi Da Hye,

 

Thank you for answering your homework. I am glad that you¡¯re well already. But what happened to you is a reminder that the pandemic is still going on.  We should still be careful about where to eat or where to go. The risks of getting COVID-19 are higher in crowded and inadequately ventilated spaces where infected people spend long periods of time together in close proximity. Outbreaks have been reported in places where people have gathered, often in crowded indoor settings and where they talk loudly, shout, breathe heavily or sing, such as restaurants, choir practices, fitness classes, nightclubs, offices and places of worship. Please wear your mask properly if you can¡¯t avoid crowded or indoor settings. Let¡¯s keep ourselves and others safe!

~Teacher Cathy

 

the last place when I visited a restaurant

>> The last place I visited was a restaurant.

because when I went to a restaurant before I got covid-19.

>> Because I went to a restaurant before I got Covid-19.

and I don't go anywhere because I got covid-19

>> And I couldn¡¯t go anywhere because I was sick.

and when I recovered from covid-19, the health center talk me "you can wear the mask for 3 days."

>> And when I recovered from Covid-19, the health center told me, ¡°You can wear the mask for three days.¡±

so I was outside in my job is my only place when I recovered.

>> So I could only stay outside my workplace when I recovered.

so I think my last place is a restaurant.

>> So, I think the last place I visited was a restaurant.

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