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I AM THE COFFEE PERSON!

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I'm kind of a coffee person. I really like drinking a coffee, especially ice black coffee.
However, I don't go to a cafe often. I usually go to a cafe when I meet a friend or want to refresh the mood during the weekends.
Because, during the week, I can get the coffee at the work place. We have a coffee machine so I can get the black coffee which tastes good even free!
Furthermore, not only me but also my parents love to drink coffee so we have a tool. By using this one, We can make a hand-drip coffee at home kind of home cafe :)
I think coffee could effect in a good way or bad way depending on someone's healthy conditions.
The good point to drink coffee is that makes me awaken. When I drink coffee in the morning, It shakes off the sleepiness so I can focus on the work but, If I drink a lot or at night, It makes me hard to sleep well.
Also, To drink the coffee can damage my health when I was empty stomach.
Therefore, The doctors recommend to drink coffee after the meal.

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Hi Ellen 
The healthiest way to take your coffee is hot-brewed and black. A moderate intake of coffee may enhance weight loss, cognitive function, and alertness. Caffeine can help to improve alertness and enhance short-term capabilities so that you can easily learn and absorb new information. However,  coffee increases anxiety and disrupts sleep patterns, leading to a vicious cycle of restless sleep. These side effects can range from mild to serious and include headache and irregular heartbeat.  "Drink COFFEE moderately"~ Teacher QUENNY 

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I'm kind of a coffee person. I really like drinking a coffee, especially ice black coffee.
However, I don't go to a café often. I usually go to a cafe when I meet a friend or want to refresh the mood during the weekends.
Because, during the week, I can get the coffee at the work place. We have a coffee machine so I can get the black coffee which tastes good even free!
Furthermore, not only me but also my parents love to drink coffee so we have a tool. By using this one, We can make a hand-drip coffee at home kind of home cafe :)
I think coffee could effect in a good way or bad way depending on someone's healthy conditions.
The good point to drink coffee is that makes me awaken. When I drink coffee in the morning, It shakes off the sleepiness so I can focus on the work but, If I drink a lot or at night, It makes me hard to sleep well.
Also, To drink the coffee can damage my health when I was empty stomach.
Therefore, The doctors recommend to drink coffee after the meal.
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I'm kind of a coffee person. I really like drinking coffee, especially iced black coffee americano. 
However, I don't go to a cafe often. I usually go to a cafe when I want to meet a friend or want to refresh the mood during the weekends.
Because, during the week, I can get coffee at the workplace. We have a coffee machine so I can make black coffee which tastes good even free!
Furthermore, not only I but also my parents love to drink coffee so we have a coffee machine.  By using this one, we can make a hand-drip coffee at home  kind of home café :)
I think coffee could affect in a good way or bad way depending on someone's health condition.
The good points to drink coffee is that makes me awake. When I drink coffee in the morning, it shakes off my sleepiness so I can focus on the work. If I drink a lot of coffee at night, it makes me hard to sleep well.
Also, drinking coffee can damage my health when I have an empty stomach.
Therefore, the doctor advised me to drink coffee after the meal.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'm kind of a coffee person. I really like drinking a coffee, especially ice black coffee.
However, I don't go to a cafe often. I usually go to a cafe when I meet a friend or want to refresh the mood during the weekends.
Because, during the week, I can get the coffee at the work place. We have a coffee machine so I can get the black coffee which tastes good even free!
Furthermore, not only me but also my parents love to drink coffee so we have a tool. By using this one, We can make a hand-drip coffee at home kind of home cafe :)
I think coffee could effect in a good way or bad way depending on someone's healthy conditions.
The good point to drink coffee is that makes me awaken. When I drink coffee in the morning, It shakes off the sleepiness so I can focus on the work but, If I drink a lot or at night, It makes me hard to sleep well.
Also, To drink the coffee can damage my health when I was empty stomach.
Therefore, The doctors recommend to drink coffee after the meal.

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