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Do you think that a language other than English should be used as an \"international language\"? Why

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English is the best language for international language I think.
Because English has used for a mother tongue in many countries, so I may communicate with other foreigners, if I can use English well.
But it is unfair for some people who don't use English as a mother tongue like me.
I did hardwork to write, read and speak English fluently for so long time just because English is the international language,
but other people who have used English when they were very young are already good at English.
They don't need to put some effort to learn another language.
Then I think we have to make another language now!! Everybody has to learn that language and use that one when people who use diffent languages communicate hehe.. I know it cannot be but just I wish.. English is so hard to learn..

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Hello Gem!
What a brilliant answer! And I agree with you. I personally think Korean should become the global language so I will have a reason to study Korean hard haha. Anyways, thank you for your effort always! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

English is the best language for international language I think.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: English is the best language to be used as the international language. 
Because English has used for a mother tongue in many countries, so I may communicate with other foreigners, if I can use English well.
>>It's because English has been used as a mother tongue in many countries, so I may communicate with other foreigners if I can use English well.
But it is unfair for some people who don't use English as a mother tongue like me.
>>CORRECT!
I did hardwork to write, read and speak English fluently for so long time just because English is the international language.
>>I worked hard to write, read and speak English fluently for so long just because English is the international language.
But other people who have used English when they were very young are already good at English.
>>CORRECT!
They don't need to put some effort to learn another language.
>>CORRECT!
Then I think we have to make another language now!! 
>>CORRECT!
Everybody has to learn that language and use that one when people who use diffent languages communicate hehe. 
>>Everybody has to learn that language and use that one when people who use different languages communicate. (NOTE: This is so true! It's a little bit unfair to people who don't have English as their mother tongue! Haha. )
I know it cannot be but just I wish. 
>>I know it cannot be but it's just a wish. 
English is so hard to learn.
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: Fighting, Gem! )
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