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What will the future be like if the AI chatbot Chat GPT is exploited to spread incorrect information

작성자: 황*하
2023-03-21 1572

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Since internet explore became the major tool to find the information, people didn't go to the library to get knowledge anymore because it takes much time to find what they want to know. Otherwise, if they use internet, it is super fast to find related articles and information. However, there are a lot of fake news and wrong information in the websites because anyone can post their experience and knowledge which is not proved. For example, we can easily find medical councel and there are a lot of advice from users who are not medical professionals. Many people don't want to see a doctor if they feel like having a problem, they simply would like to hear that "you are okay",'you don't have worry about it" from someone. So, I think there will be a lot of social problem occured, if Chat GPT has introduced at the market in earnest. Some companies might use false information for their profits. In addition, there will be many victims because of the personal information leak.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Since internet explore became the major tool to find the information, people didn't go to the library to get knowledge anymore because it takes much time to find what they want to know. 
>> Since internet explorer became the major tool to find the information, people don't go to the library to get knowledge anymore because it takes much time to find what they want to know.
Otherwise, if they use internet, it is super fast to find related articles and information. 
>> CORRECT!
However, there are a lot of fake news and wrong information in the websites because anyone can post their experience and knowledge which is not proved. 
>> However, there are a lot of fake news and wrong information in the websites because anyone can post their experience and knowledge which is not proven.
For example, we can easily find medical councel and there are a lot of advice from users who are not medical professionals. 
>> For example, we can easily find medical counsel and there are a lot of advice from users who are not medical professionals.
Many people don't want to see a doctor if they feel like having a problem, they simply would like to hear that "you are okay", "you don't have worry about it" from someone. 
>> CORRECT!
So, I think there will be a lot of social problem occured, if Chat GPT has introduced at the market in earnest. 
>> So, I think there will be a lot of social problems occurring, if Chat GPT is introduced in the market in earnest. 
Some companies might use false information for their profits. 
>> CORRECT!
In addition, there will be many victims because of the personal information leak.
>> CORRECT!

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