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In my option The best thing that keep good relationship is trust friends and think their feeling
Trust mean that If we don't trust the friends than we can't talk comfortable and always ends up with the fighting and also we need to make our friends trust us
thinking their feeling mean that we should not think only us it apply every relationship but especially important in the friends these two things are the things we should do when we want a good relationship with the friends.

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Hello, Sang U! ^^
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See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

In my option The best thing that keep good relationship is trust friends and think their feeling
>>> In my opinion the best thing that keeps a good relationship is to trust friends and think about their feelings.

Trust mean that If we don't trust the friends than we can't talk comfortable and always ends up with the fighting and also we need to make our friends trust us
>>> Trust means that If we don't trust our friends then we can't talk comfortably and always ends up fighting, also we need to make our friends trust us.

thinking their feeling mean that we should not think only us it apply every relationship but especially important in the friends these two things are the things we should do when we want a good relationship with the friends.
>>> Thinking about their feelings means that we should not think only about ourselves it applies to every relationship, especially important friends. These two things are the things we should do when we want a good relationship with our friends.
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