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What springs to mind when you hear the word \'perfect\'?

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HOMEWORK:
[Creative Writing] What springs to mind when you hear the word 'perfect'? Answer in 3-5 sentences.
the golden ratio

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I think about there is not anythings perfect.

¿Ö³ÄÇÏ¸é ¿Ïº®ÇÏ´ÙÀÇ ±âÁØÀº °³ÀÎÀÇ »ý°¢¿¡ µû¶ó ¹Ù²î±â ¶§¹®ÀÌ´Ù.
It¡¯s because criteria of perfect also change by individual¡¯s think.

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For example criteria of beautiful the golden ratio is also not perfect.

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It¡¯s because it is all diferent for beautiful person who people think.

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Hello, Daisy! ^^,)

No person can be described as perfect, flawless, or unquestionably without fault due to the multidimensional nature of individuals, even if they do have one or more developed positive traits.

Thank you for answering your homework. I will talk to you again tomorrow.

Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


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I think about there is not anythings perfect.
>>> 
I think about how there is nothing perfect.
¿Ö³ÄÇÏ¸é ¿Ïº®ÇÏ´ÙÀÇ ±âÁØÀº °³ÀÎÀÇ »ý°¢¿¡ µû¶ó ¹Ù²î±â ¶§¹®ÀÌ´Ù.
It¡¯s because criteria of perfect also change by individual¡¯s think.
>>> It's because people's perceptions of what constitutes perfection change.
>>> OR: It's because people's ideas of what defines perfection change through time.
¿¹¸¦ µé¸é ¾Æ¸§´Ù¿òÀÇ ±âÁØÀΠȲ±ÝºñÀ²µµ ¿Ïº®ÇÏÁö ¾Ê´Ù.
For example criteria of beautiful the golden ratio is also not perfect.
>>> For example, the criteria for a beautiful golden ratio are also not perfect.
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It¡¯s because it is all diferent for beautiful person who people think.
>>> It¡¯s because people define beauty differently.
>>> OR: It's because everyone has a different definition of beautiful.
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