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Hello, T.Donna.
There were many patients and clients in the clinic today.
However, I am getting used to these busy days.
As I said this morning, I have to prepare for the lecture of seminar which will be held this Saturday.
Fortunately, I already made a basic presentation file, so I only have to correct it more smooth.
Dr. MJ left the clinic as soon as he saw the last client.
Thus, I wondered that he prepared for his lecture, so I asked, "What do you say to your lecture?" and he replied, "Oh, bro. What should I do? I didn't do it at all. But, I have got to cut my hair now. Bye~"
At lunch time, he hided in the dark room and surprised me.
I almost passed out.
He likes to freak me out everyday.
One day, he said, "I know that I am not an average man. I am always in the borderline of psychic disease. "
A real psycho doesn't have an insight of his disease.
Thus, I believe he is normal.
Do you know what I am saying?
Lately, I want to learn a vocal skil

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Dr. Kim!

When you feel really busy, doing things in a fast pace can seem as the solution to get as many things done as possible. Working in a fast-paced environment like your clinic can be an exciting and motivating opportunity if you enjoy this type of workplace. There are many perks to this type of atmosphere, such as always having a task to complete and having the day go by quickly. Knowing how to navigate operating in this environment will ensure your success.

Making your presentation more interesting through the use of multimedia can help to improve the audience's focus. However, make sure that it is only an aid and it is you who the other doctors need to pay attention to. Good luck on your preparations.

It's normal. People all the time want to be psychopaths, and they generally fall into a few categories. I wonder what category Dr. MJ belongs... ^^

Music stimulates our brains to think creatively and come up with out-of-the-box ideas and solutions to problems. I guess you don't need a teacher for this. As a singer, you can find YouTube videos of improving voice techniques. Try watching this video. I chose him from the Internet because he is handsome: https://www.google.com/search?q=voice+techniques+for+men&sxsrf=AJOqlzULH2-gH2R6v4E2yX5ANO-oqUFCMA:1679363580475&source=lnms&tbm=vid&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwi4s6bt9Ov9AhUFTmwGHUjJCyIQ_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1920&bih=937&dpr=1#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:9a3b8354,vid:tg827vz4sVg

Your composition's best element today is the quotation between your conversation with Dr. MJ. The punctuations were perfect, congratulations! 

P.S. It seems like there are some missing parts of your composition. Our page has a word limit so, kindly check if your whole message was sent.

Sieze the day!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

There were many patients and clients in the clinic today.
>> Correct!

However, I am getting used to these busy days.
>> Correct!

As I said this morning, I have to prepare for the lecture of seminar which will be held this Saturday.
>> As I said this morning, I have to prepare for the lecture- seminar which will be held this Saturday.

Fortunately, I already made a basic presentation file, so I only have to correct it more smooth.
>> Fortunately, I already made a basic presentation file, so I only have to correct it more smoothly.

Dr. MJ left the clinic as soon as he saw the last client.
>> Correct!

Thus, I wondered that he prepared for his lecture, so I asked, "What do you say to your lecture?" and he replied, "Oh, bro. What should I do? I didn't do it at all. But, I have got to cut my hair now. Bye~"
>> Thus, I wondered if he prepared for his lecture, so I asked, "What will you say to your lecture?" and he replied, "Oh, bro. What should I do? I didn't do it at all. But, I have got to cut my hair now. Bye~"/ Excellent sentences! 

At lunch time, he hided in the dark room and surprised me.
>> At lunch time, he hid in the dark room and surprised me.

I almost passed out.
>> Correct!

He likes to freak me out everyday.
>> Correct!

One day, he said, "I know that I am not an average man. I am always in the borderline of psychic disease. "
>> One day, he said, "I know that I am not an average man. I am always in the borderline of a psycho disease. "

A real psycho doesn't have an insight of his disease.
>> Correct!

Thus, I believe he is normal.
>> Correct!

Do you know what I am saying?
>> Correct!

Lately, I want to learn a vocal skill.
>> Correct!
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