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I think the older generations are not correct in many cases.

The power of experience is huge. But world is changing so fast.

There are many new things which older generation have not experienced.

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Happy Monday, Mr. Son. Nobody really knows everything even with the advantage of experience. I agree that even the older generation has some disadvantages that the younger generation has over them. Learning is continuous no matter what generation we belong to. Enjoy the rest of this Monday. See you in our next class. ~Jane c",) 


I think the older generations are not correct in many cases.
>> CORRECT =) 

The power of experience is huge. But world is changing so fast.
>> The power of experience is huge but the world is changing so fast. 
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>> The advantage of having experience is huge but the world is changing so fast. 

There are many new things which older generation have not experienced.
>> There are many new things that the older generation has not experienced. 

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