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When the spring is coming, my feeling is very good. Because the clothes is thiner than before, and also the clothes is very pretty than winter clothes.
And cherry blossom will bloom. So the main street of my university will be very beautiful.
My university also festival when the cherry blossom is bloom. So it will be very funny.
But the end of spring, it will be annoying. Because summer will coming, so the weather will be hotter than before. And also I have to losing my weight.

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Hello, Ye Lim!
Have a great day ahead! See you tomorrow! ^^
-T.Jhozel 
When the spring is coming, my feeling is very good. 
>> My mood improves as spring approaches. 
Because the clothes is thiner than before, and also the clothes is very pretty than winter clothes.
>> Because the clothes are thinner than previously, and they are also more attractive than winter clothes.
And cherry blossom will bloom. 
>> Correct!
So the main street of my university will be very beautiful.
>> So my university's main street will be really lovely.
My university also festival when the cherry blossom is bloom. 
>> When the cherry blossoms bloom, my university also holds a festival. 
So it will be very funny.
>> As a result, it will be really fun.
But the end of spring, it will be annoying. 
>> But it will be inconvenient near the end of spring. 
Because summer will coming, so the weather will be hotter than before. 
>>Because summer is approaching, the temperature will be hotter than usual. 
And also I have to losing my weight.
>> Also, I need to lose weight.

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