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I personally think they can't do it. For example, they recommend you that asparagus helps your health to clean blood. Do you want to try it? most people're aleady known for foods which help health taste bad. But a lot of fast foods taste good!!

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Fabulous Monday, Elic! Thank you for re-enrolling. Utilize every moment to prepare your mind and body for future endeavors. Succeeding in life is easy as long as you believe in yourself. Trust yourself, and success will come along.

I personally think they can't do it.
>> CORRECT.
For example, they recommend you that asparagus helps your health to clean blood.
>> CORRECT.
Do you want to try it? most people're aleady known for foods which help health taste bad. But a lot of fast foods taste good!!
>> Do you want to try it? Most people already know that food that helps improve our health taste bad. However, there are still food that taste good.
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