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I think collecting something is personality.
It is a hobby.
But It should be admitted from others.
Many men want to be a hero like Superman.
The person who was collecting hotsause bottles would be interested in taste of food.
But used toothpastes are only garbage.

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Hi, Ms. Sunny!
I agree that collecting something, influences your interest.  We may not understand the reason of other people, but there's one thing for sure, They want to gratify what they missed when they were young.
Have a good day!
Aki~

I think collecting something is personality.
>> I think collecting something is personal.
>> I think collecting something depends on one's personality.

It is a hobby.
>> CORRECT!

But It should be admitted from others.
>>  But It should be admitted by others.
>> But it should be supported by others.

Many men want to be a hero like Superman.
>> CORRECT!

The person who was collecting hotsause bottles would be interested in taste of food.
>>  The person who was collecting hot sauce bottles would be interested in the taste of the food.

But used toothpastes are only garbage.
>>  But used toothpaste' bottles are only garbage.
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