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What springs to mind when you hear the word \'perfect\'?

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I spring self-control, patience, effort to my mind. In my opinion, being self-control, they have to take many efforts through trials and errors. For the proceeds, patience is the vital element.

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Happy Friday, Ye Jin! ^_^

Although a lot relies on how you define perfection, in theory, we can all be perfect. As human beings, we are limited, and anything that is limited can be perfected within those limits. Ironically, the same constraints that allow for perfection hinder us from becoming perfect.

Thank you for answering your homework.^^

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I spring self-control, patience, effort to my mind.
>>> I think about self-control, patience, and effort.
>>> OR: Self-control, patience, and effort come to mind.
In my opinion, being self-control, they have to take many efforts through trials and errors. For the proceeds, patience is the vital element.
>>> In my opinion, to be self-controlled, they have to make many efforts through trials and errors. For that to proceed, patience is a vital element.
>>> OR: They have to put up a lot of work via failures and mistakes, in my opinion, to be self-controlled. Patience is a key component for something to happen.
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