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Which bad habit of yours do you think would be the most difficult to get rid of? Why?

작성자: 장*은
2023-03-17 908

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It is difficult to get rid of habbits but some bad habbits are harder to get rid of.
I think watching cell phone so long time is so hard to change.
I am tired everyday because I wake up at 6am, go to the work, after I check out the work, I go to the fitness center,
play golf, and then I go back home. It is always 8:30-9:00pm. Then I have dinner and make some for tomorrow breakfast and lunch.
After I wash the dishes and take a shower, it is over 10 pm. This is my routine.
So I have to go to bed early, but that time, I start to watching youtube, Netflix and something else.
I always think I have to sleep.. I have to sleep... but I don't. Then I actually sleep when I can't bear no more time.
Next morning I always regret myself about didn't sleep early yesterday.
I regard the time that I did everything I had to do is perfectly my time.
So if I didn't use that time well, I pretend myself that I'm just a worker like a robot. It is the reason why I still feel hard to change my habbit.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Gem!
I relate with you. Phone addiction is sometimes hard to control because it is so entertaining haha. Anyway, I commend you for your effort this week. You deserve to have a really good time this weekend! See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

It is difficult to get rid of habbits but some bad habbits are harder to get rid of.
>>It is difficult to get rid of habits but some bad habits are harder to get rid of. (NOTE: Just spelling mistakes here but the sentence is correct ^^ )
I think watching cell phone so long time is so hard to change.
>>I think looking at your cell phone for so long is a habit that is so hard to change.
I am tired everyday because I wake up at 6am, go to the work, after I check out the work, I go to the fitness center, play golf, and then I go back home. 
>>I am tired every day because I wake up at 6am, go to work, after I clock out , I go to the fitness center, play golf, and then I go back home. 
It is always 8:30-9:00pm. 
>>CORRECT!
Then I have dinner and make some for tomorrow breakfast and lunch.
>>Then I have dinner and make some food for tomorrow's breakfast and lunch.
After I wash the dishes and take a shower, it is over 10 pm. This is my routine.
>>CORRECT!
So I have to go to bed early, but that time, I start to watching youtube, Netflix and something else.
>>So I have to go to bed early, but at that time, I start watching YouTube, Netflix and something else.
I always think I have to sleep.. I have to sleep... but I don't. Then I actually sleep when I can't bear no more time.
>>I always think, "I have to sleep. I have to sleep." But I don't. Then I actually sleep when I can't bear it anymore. 
Next morning I always regret myself about didn't sleep early yesterday.
>>The next morning, I always regret not sleeping early the night before. 
I regard the time that I did everything I had to do is perfectly my time.
>>I regard the time that I did everything I had to do as perfectly my time.
So if I didn't use that time well, I pretend myself that I'm just a worker like a robot. 
>>So if I didn't use that time well, I pretend that I'm just a worker like a robot. 
It is the reason why I still feel hard to change my habbit.
>>It is the reason why it's still hard for me to change my habits. 
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