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The most important thing I learned from my mother is to be polite to adults.
My mom says that if I'm with friends, it's okay to use swear words. But she said never in front of adults. Of course, it's obvious, but because it's obvious, my mother taught me this.

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Hello, Hee Song! ^^
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The most important thing I learned from my mother is to be polite to adults.
>>> CORRECT!

My mom says that if I'm with friends, it's okay to use swear words. 
>>> CORRECT!

But she said never in front of adults. 
>>> CORRECT!

Of course, it's obvious, but because it's obvious, my mother taught me this.
>>> CORRECT!
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