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What springs to mind when you hear the word \'perfect\'?

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If I hear that I'm perfect, I'll feel nice. But I think I will remind my actions, because I should check to see if I'm missing anything. I will be a more meticulous person.

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Happy Friday, Seon U! ^_^

Although a lot relies on how you define perfection, in theory, we can all be perfect. As human beings, we are limited, and anything that is limited can be perfected within those limits. Ironically, the same constraints that allow for perfection hinder us from becoming perfect.

Thank you for answering your homework. See you later in class.^^

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If I hear that I'm perfect, I'll feel nice. But I think I will remind my actions, because I should check to see if I'm missing anything. I will be a more meticulous person.
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