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Waiting teaches us to be proud. When we finally get what we've been waiting for, we feel proud. It's not easy to feel this proud. The most important thing I've been waiting for is the test. The wait for my test is not over yet. However, I will continue to wait for the final exam in my teens and feel proud.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Waiting teaches us to be proud. 
>>> CORRECT!

When we finally get what we've been waiting for, we feel proud. 
>>> CORRECT!

It's not easy to feel this proud. 
>>> CORRECT!

The most important thing I've been waiting for is the test. 
>>> CORRECT!

The wait for my test is not over yet. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, I will continue to wait for the final exam in my teens and feel proud.
>>> CORRECT!
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