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Space exploration is necessary to find another planet on which humans could pursue their lives. Space exploration also makes us smarter, improves our lives, and increases our functionality to triumph over technological challenges. But  Space exploration is a waste of resources and it's dangerous too, so many accidents and problems happened in space like the shattering of space vehicles, explosions, pieces falling off, and missing the gravity of earth, and that is even a waste of more money to fix them. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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It¡¯s advantage is can solve our own questions. But disadvantage is not safe
>> The advantage of  Space Exploration is it can solve our curiosity and questions about the Universe and it also makes us smarter. But the disadvantage is hazardous to travel to space. 
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