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It is true that this system was inflexible and commanding system at the last government.

To purpose of limitting working hours is to improve the qualiyt of worker's life.

But actually even they have time, if then don't have money they can't enjoy their life.

We need nave flexibility that companies and workers can choose in working hours within special range.

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Good day, Ms. Lily!
I actually agree on the part that the government should provide flexible policies that will both benefit he worker and the employers. Sometimes, most policies give advantages to the company and the government but few benefits for the workers. 
Thank you for this!
Aki~


It is true that this system was inflexible and commanding system at the last government.
>>> It is true that this system was an inflexible and commanding system in the last government.

To purpose of limitting working hours is to improve the qualiyt of worker's life.
>>> The purpose of limiting working hours is to improve the quality of a worker's life.

But actually even they have time, if then don't have money they can't enjoy their life.
>>> But actually even if they have time if they don't have money they can't enjoy their life.

We need nave flexibility that companies and workers can choose in working hours within special range.
>>> We need to have the flexibility that companies and workers can choose in working hours within a special range.
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