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The advantage of a large group of friends is that we can share different informations and many ideas. Talking and listening to each other, we learn some kinds of patience and widen our understanding. Also we can have many activities such as playing games or team sports. However, there are some drawbacks. We sometimes have difficulty making any plans or any decisions because of different ideas and arguments.

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Good morning, Gi Yean!
I fully agree with you. Having a large group of friends makes life enjoyable and engaging. However, conflicts are unavoidable as a result of our different personalities, and that's okay. :)
Anyway, thanks for completing your homework! See you tomorrow~ 
-T.Jhozel 
The advantage of a large group of friends is that we can share different informations and many ideas. 
>> Correct!
OR: 
The benefit of a large group of friends is that we can share a variety of information and ideas. 
Talking and listening to each other, we learn some kinds of patience and widen our understanding. 
>>Correct!
OR: We gain patience and understanding by talking and listening to one another. 
Also we can have many activities such as playing games or team sports. 
Correct!
>>
 We can also engage in a variety of activities such as playing games or team sports. 
However, there are some drawbacks. 
>> Correct!
We sometimes have difficulty making any plans or any decisions because of different ideas and arguments.
>> Correct!
OR: 
We sometimes struggle to make plans or decisions due to competing ideas and arguments.
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