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2023-03-14 494

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Hello, T.Donna.
How was your day?
As a matter of fact, I got a sleep too late last night.
That's why I was tired whole day.
I received the text from Dr.MJ on my way to the clinic this morning.
He told me that he and a new male manager already arrived at the clinic.
Although I arrived at the clinic early (around 1 hour before our beginning of work), I couldn't help but felt guilty.
Meanwhile, we realized our big problem during the morning conference.
Many patients who were more than expected couldn't find the proper drugstores nearby.
Hence, Dr. MJ and I contacted the web design company and made a guide image about drugstore so quickly.
We posted the image on our monitors inside the clinic.
Of course, we did our basic work as well simultaneously.
I am not sure if it was good or bad, anyway, there were not too many patients and clients today, so our staff were not stressed relatively.
T.Donna, I confused my homework, because of the word "challenge".
Let me know about it.
See you soon.

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Good afternoon, Dr. Kim!

I had a tranquil day yesterday, thank you for asking. You had too much to do on the other hand. I guess the cycle of your days have gone longer for two days since you work seven days a week. I hope that you will get the hang of it.

Anyway, by now you should have gotten used to the eccentric ways of Dr. MJ. It is true when they say that smart people behave in a different way. ^^ Do not feel guilty of going to work when he got there earlier than you. Meanwhile, adding visuals to step-by-step instructions can focus your clients and patients into details that may otherwise not have been communicated verbally. This is a brilliant idea.

The word 'challenge' pertains to the difficulties parts of your work according to the homework question. Then, please go over the grammar suggestions below. 'As a matter of fact" is used when you have mentioned a premise first. For example: "I am starving. As a matter of fact, I can eat a whole chicken now." Here, there is a first part as premise which is "I am starving." before we mention, "As a matter or fact..." The other suggestions follow. A job well done!

See you later then!

-T Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

How was your day?
>> Correct!

As a matter of fact, I got a sleep too late last night.
>> Correct!
Or: I slept too late last night again.

That's why I was tired whole day.
>> That's why I was tired the whole day.

I received the text from Dr.MJ on my way to the clinic this morning.
>> I received a text from Dr.MJ on my way to the clinic this morning.

He told me that he and a new male manager already arrived at the clinic.
>> He told me that he and the new male manager already arrived at the clinic.

Although I arrived at the clinic early (around 1 hour before our beginning of work), I couldn't help but felt guilty.
>> Although I arrived at the clinic early (around 1 hour before our beginning of work), I couldn't help but feet guilty.

Meanwhile, we realized our big problem during the morning conference.
>> Correct!

Many patients who were more than expected couldn't find the proper drugstores nearby.
>> Correct!

Hence, Dr. MJ and I contacted the web design company and made a guide image about drugstore so quickly.
>> Hence, Dr. MJ and I contacted the web design company and made a guide image about the drugstore so quickly.

We posted the image on our monitors inside the clinic.
>> Correct!

Of course, we did our basic work as well simultaneously.
>> Correct!

I am not sure if it was good or bad, anyway, there were not too many patients and clients today, so our staff were not stressed relatively.
>> Correct!

T.Donna, I confused my homework, because of the word "challenge".
>> T. Donna, I'm confused with my homework, because of the word "challenge".

Let me know about it.
>> Correct!

See you soon.
>> Correct!
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