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Many people think that we learn from the past, but there are many patterns in history. Do you think

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No. I think histories are repeated by people. It's because history is not living things so it cannot repeat itself, but we have to repeat it. Because we are living things and most of histories are made by human. If we forget about history, we can't get good score on the exam, and it is very embarrassing happen.

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Good evening Daisy. 
Thank you for sharing your opinion about it. 
I agree that people are the ones repeating history and it's because people never learn from their mistakes. 
Anyhow, I hope you're resting well. ^^
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry

No. 
>> No, it doesn't. 
I think histories are repeated by people. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because history is not living things so it cannot repeat itself, but we have to repeat it. 
>> It's because history is not a living thing so it cannot repeat itself. We are the ones repeating it. 
Because we are living things and most of histories are made by human. 
>> It's because we are living things and most histories are made by humans.
If we forget about history, we can't get good score on the exam, and it is very embarrassing happen.
>> If we forget about history, we can't get a good score in the exam, and it is a very embarrassing to happen.
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