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When I was 17, I traveled the China with my family. We visited the Great wall of China, so all of my family members are tired and starving. So we went to the restaurant where the guide recommended to us. But we could not eat that much. The food of the restaurant is too exotic for me because of the traditional spices. We left a bunch of food and went to the convenience store. This event is my worst experience at a restaurant.

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Happy Wednesday, Robin! 
I can already imagine your faces when you tried eating the food. I know that different countries have different ways of cooking and I think, this is one of them. The guide may have recommended it because it's delicious for them, however, it's not suitable to the taste of foreigners.
-T. Caitlyn
When I was 17, I traveled the China with my family. 
>> When I was 17, I traveled to China with my family. 
We visited the Great wall of China, so all of my family members are tired and starving. 
>> CORRECT
So we went to the restaurant where the guide recommended to us. 
>> So we went to a restaurant that the guide recommended.
But we could not eat that much. 
>> CORRECT
The food of the restaurant is too exotic for me because of the traditional spices. 
>> CORRECT
We left a bunch of food and went to the convenience store. 
>> CORRECT
This event is my worst experience at a restaurant.
>> CORRECT
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